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      Screaming Inside

      Tears fall down my face
      as I lie here on my bed
      Wishing I were in another place
      almost wishing I were dead

      No one bothers to look deep enough
      to see the hurt within
      Everyday seems to be so rough
      my life is an undeniable sin

      Acceptance is what I long for
      but that is merely a dream
      This pain comes from within my core
      and I'm not who I seem

      I try to hide who I am inside
      I can't let my guard down
      And no matter how I'd tried and tried
      I cannot ever change this frown

      Open your eyes and look at me
      listen to my cries
      I need your help - can't you see?
      it's written in my eyes
      Raised by:ffx-dreamz

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      Nice, although I'm getting a bit tired of reading depressing poetry

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      Scribler said "no one likes a morbid bastard"

      But it was good.
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      thanks... i think
      Raised by:ffx-dreamz

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      its not that its bad....

      I get what there sayin, its not a bad poem, its just to predictable, its like you can guess every other line before you hear it.....

      ssdd...

      Truth, Peace, Love, Revolution, and Unity
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