Thread: Screaming Inside

Tears fall down my face
as I lie here on my bed
Wishing I were in another place
almost wishing I were dead

No one bothers to look deep enough
to see the hurt within
Everyday seems to be so rough
my life is an undeniable sin

Acceptance is what I long for
but that is merely a dream
This pain comes from within my core
and I'm not who I seem

I try to hide who I am inside
I can't let my guard down
And no matter how I'd tried and tried
I cannot ever change this frown

Open your eyes and look at me
listen to my cries
I need your help - can't you see?
it's written in my eyes

Nice, although I'm getting a bit tired of reading depressing poetry

Scribler said "no one likes a morbid bastard"

But it was good.

thanks... i think

I get what there sayin, its not a bad poem, its just to predictable, its like you can guess every other line before you hear it.....

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