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      My Work

      I will post any work I do in this thread, so I don't have to clutter this forum with small poems and other fragments.

      Here's a short poem I thought up yesterday:

      Sometimes I feel
      That I'm wearing lead shoes
      I try to fly, but am too heavy
      What is weighing me down?
      Is it fear? Is it god? Is it life?
      I fly in my dreams
      I fly in my hopes
      What is it that keeps me from flying?

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      Nice man, I seriously know what you mean by that little stanza. Keep writing.

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      No man has seen the sunset
      No man has felt my pain
      No man has seen the Beauty
      In the color of the rain

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      Here are some pictures of mine:







      These are just the raw pictures, they look a bit better with a little cropping.

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      OMG those pics are REALLY good...in fact, I like the third one so much I'm gonna see if it fits my desktop. It'd make a [email protected]$$ wallpaper!

      Woot!

      Edit: And woot on the poem too...deep man, real deep. Keep on!
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      Here's a poem for you:

      Man trots clueless through the world
      Ignoring that tapistry before him unfurled
      Before him lies the greatest glory
      Hidden behind his sad life story
      Never looking, never seeing
      Ignorant of his very being
      He walks as greatest beauties hide
      Without an angel as his guide
      Super profundo on the early eve of your day

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      Amazing stuff, keep it up!

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      Another poem:

      I peer through the window in the back of my head
      I wander and wonder if I really am dead
      I watch life slide across the floor
      Accross the fields, and out the door
      The door that leads out into space
      So far from warm mother's embrace
      I float up, tired of life
      Tired of trouble, tired of strife
      I try to escape, but life pulls me back in
      And I once again find myself in my own skin
      Super profundo on the early eve of your day

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      hey, i like that last poem...it sounds like SP, or an OBE...
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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      I turn off the light and I fall asleep soon.
      I search in my head for the door to the moon.
      I open the door and fall out into space,
      Below lies the moon in great splendor and grace.
      I drift down, down, down twoards the great Lunar Plain.
      Down, down, down, twoards my angel's domain.
      She sighs as she wakes then her eyes meet with mine.
      They swallow me up and our souls intertwine.
      We then separate for god does not allow,
      Mortals and Angels their love to avow.
      Super profundo on the early eve of your day

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      I really like all your work (especially the last one poem)! You're very talented!!

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      Poem...

      It's not an easy thing to allow someone to see inside one's self, but you pulled it off nicely...
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      Here's a song I made up while driving to work it isn't much without the music, or even with it, but I needed a place to put it down:

      I wish that I could learn to fly
      I'd fly up so high and touch the sky
      I'd look down on all Humanity
      My friends call this dream insanity

      refrain: I wish that I could learn to fly x4

      I was walking down the street one day
      I saw a man in black and he said hey
      Jesus Christ is lord and savior
      I told him that I'd heard it all before

      refrain

      I read that man forgot how he could fly
      He dies just before his wings can dry
      Maybe he'll fly another day
      I'd still like to find another way

      refrain
      Super profundo on the early eve of your day

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      Poem

      The Number Man
      With numbers can
      End life's great dream
      So it would seem
      He never has
      Come so far as
      To solve his dreams
      Though his mind teems
      With ways to solve
      What suns disolve
      When up they rise
      Dreams they despise
      The number man
      From his dreams ran
      Sought out the sun
      So he could shun
      What numbers fail
      To put to scale
      What they succeed
      To veil in creed
      The creed upheld
      By man impelled
      To see the world in numbers.
      Super profundo on the early eve of your day

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      As an aspiring writer, I would like you to know that I admire you for your amazing talent and your courage.

      \"The pen is mightier than the sword\"[/b]
      Always remember that. Life has a lot to show you and I'm glad to see you are willing to see.
      Shine on, you crazy diamond!

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      Some creative prose:

      Night

      The night devours the day, a shroud is cast over the heavens. Do the heavens see the deeds of men from behind the veil of night? Only the lonely moon casts his eyes upon the earth, but even he must close his eyes. The Earth washes away its painting of light, revealing its black color. Man tries to defeat the night, but its power is irresistable. The light he shines out into the darkness is swallowed by the night. Man stands defenseless against the power of the darkness. Countless horrors swarm unseen around him. He is crippled by his fear of what he does not know. His greatest fear lies in uncertainty, his only fear lies in uncertainty, uncertainty is his fear. If you embrace the night you become more than a man, you become free. Place your foot firmly on the unseen ground, run into the darkness. Annihilate your fear with firm faith in uncertainty, clear sight of the night.
      Super profundo on the early eve of your day

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      It's been a while since I've posted anything here but I'm feeling creative.

      There is a name, I cannot read it
      There is a voice I cannot hear
      It tells me answers to the questions
      Dreamt up by my thoughts and fears

      There is a face, I cannot see it
      There is a figure coming near
      I cannot sense its ghostly presence
      With my mortal eyes and ears

      I feel a force, I dare not name it
      I see its work now every day
      Behind a wall of veiled perception
      It leads my life a different way
      Super profundo on the early eve of your day

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