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      THE FEELING YOU GET WHEN YOU KNOW

      THE FEELING YOU GET WHEN YOU KNOW

      The feeling you get when you know you’re alive!
      that sensation can change your life,
      through the many paths you blindly wonder,
      looking for the wrong one and never the right,
      when the true one is waiting to be found.

      When you stand alone and realise who you are,
      that feeling can never be taken away
      by neither force nor anger shell I ever lie to myself,
      and go against what I believe.
      For I am who I am,
      and not who you are.

      The rules which you make are not mine,
      so why should you make me follow them,
      and for you not to follow mine?

      That fear you feel when you’re forced into something you don’t want to feel,
      why should we be made to feel that which we don’t wish to feel?
      when feeling is all we have?

      Why must it be crowded with useless dust?
      when it can be filled with the most beautiful passion?

      We all set out to be alive,
      but existence is what we all fear deep within our hearts.

      Escape is what we need,
      the bars to your soul are in front of you,
      and you are the only one who has the key.

      There is one thing that must be stressed,
      don’t ever lie to yourself.

      When lying is all you do,
      there is no room for being you.

      When all lies do is trick all your intentions at being yourself.

      The feeling you get when you know you’re alive,
      that sensation can change your life.


      Just wanted to see if anyone understands this or its just bollocks

      “The once colourfully lit sunlight sky becomes consumed with clouds of fire, the soft yellow shade assimilating into the dark and depressing heavenly lit red hue. Its intensity rises like waves from the sea, rolling towards an unknown destination between heaven and the hell ridden earth. The image before his eyes looks like a canvas, a painting which glimpses into another dimension, outside this world. A distant land that appears baron before innocent eyes. The shapes emerge into a mysterious pattern, seemingly unstructured within his blistering vision. A circle forms within a vortex of clouds, thunder echoes closer between a dream and trueness, the distinctions of which seem to blur with the vision of lightening striking inside the weird and wonderful whirlpool of fire light”.
      "I was looking back to see if you were looking back at me to see me looking back at you".



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      you wrote this a long time ago...it's beautiful!
      very expressive, i wish i could write something like that...
      'all of the moments that already passed/
      try to go back and make them last.'

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      Originally posted by irishcream
      you wrote this a long time ago...it's beautiful!
      very expressive, i wish i could write something like that...
      Thanks, thats really nice irishcream

      I never thought anyone would answer this post

      The only problem with poetry is that i cant express myself when i'm happy, i can only write poetry like this when somthing is wrong. I dont feel the need to write down my thoughts when i'm happy, i live my life and enjoy it rather than examine it...

      Thanks for posting a comment.
      "I was looking back to see if you were looking back at me to see me looking back at you".



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      It's a bit lengthy. But I'll assume it was decent otherwise. I didn't read it though, because I don't like poems for the most part, and especially not long ones.

      If you want something that's a page long and has a moral meaning, and will still invoke interest enough to read it, write a short story.

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