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      Haiku I wrote, Curious for opinions.

      I wrote this when I was high and found it the next day on my computer. I was really tripping and I barely remember what I was thinking of when I wrote it, but it still makes me feel weird.


      Wander Forever:



      Wet air catpures leaves
      They hang from trees, too tired
      The breeze laying down

      A dark lake lies still
      Gentle ripples touch its mask
      It waits, as always

      Bugs over damp grass
      A thousand tasks for one mind
      They do not give up

      Sunlight falls to floor
      Behind closed eyes, neurons spark
      Wander Forever
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      hey i liked it!

      let me know the next time you write something when tripping.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Adanac View Post
      Bugs over damp grass
      A thousand tasks for one mind
      They do not give up
      bugs = us
      damp grass = the discouraged human condition of universal man
      a thousand tasks = our jobs/duties/goals that we have set
      one mind = the intelligence/enlightenment/reward we desire.
      they do not give up = we keep working for some thing/reality/concept/idea

      just my two cents for interpretation.

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      I like these alot.

      The last one is my favorite.
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      This has to be one of the most beautiful pieces of poetry I have ever read.

      edit: write. a lot. keep doing it and do not stop.
      Last edited by CanceledCzech; 01-13-2010 at 06:29 AM.

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      This is so beautiful.
      You merely have to change your point of view slightly, and then that glass will sparkle when it reflects the light.

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      Wow...and you did this all stoned? I am officially impressed. Keep up the good work. (Quietly protesting the 10-character limit)

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      Hey thanks a lot guys... maybe I will write another one! haha
      I had a strange dream last night...

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      Evening turns to night
      And as orange fades to black,
      ghosts fill the dim streets
      This shit never happens to me

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