for the last few months i've been writing a fiction story with the main basis around lucid dreaming and the characters conflict between waking life and lucid dreaming. I'm actually really excited about writing it and expect it to be done in about 8 months, time permitting.

to the point, every once in a while i want to post a few scenes here to get some criticism concerning the story, writing style, etc.. Granted, if it is good or bad i would love to get some feedback from this community. i will post a scene in this thread within the next few weeks hopefully.