Thread: The Oriadis: Making of a Sociopath

This is just a simple, evolving story I was writing in the World Record thread, and I decided I wanted a place where it'd be easier to find all the posts at once. Most of these posts will have all of 4 lines in them, thus is why I put it in SB. This is not for you to continue the story. It is for you to read along, making (if you want) comments every now and then. I'll be the only one writing the story. So those are the ground rules, feel free to read along with what I've already written.

Originally Posted by Xedan

There once was a man.

A man who thought for himself.

He was called the Oriadis.

Originally Posted by Xedan

I witnessed a murder today.

I was hiding in the shadows.

The murderer was the Mayor or Townston.

~ The Oriadis

Originally Posted by Xedan

I went back to the murder scene.

The authorities had swept the place and found no leads.

But I knew where he hid the locket.

~ The Oriadis

Originally Posted by Xedan

I looked at the photo.

I knew who's it was.

Ma Risely.

~ The Oriadis

Originally Posted by Xedan

I investigated further.

The victim's name was Stella Risely.

The next of kin.

~ The Oriadis

Originally Posted by Xedan

Ma Risely was sick.

Very sick.

And the Mayor was in her will.

~ The Oriadis

Originally Posted by Xedan

The Mayor was in for a lot of money.

But there was only one thing he stood to gain by offing Stella.

The deed to Ma's property.

~ The Oriadis

Originally Posted by Xedan

I went to Ma Risely's house today.

I searched high and low, finding nothing out of the ordinary.

Except a locked file cabinet.

~ The Oriadis

I went to a nearby locksmith for help.

He told me how I could pick the lock.

I didn't believe what I found.

~ The Oriadis

Of course, as me and Jesus of Suburbia have found, the WR thread is a great place for infinite inspiration . What is it Oriadis found? Hmmm.....gah......

You'll see. It's good.

Originally Posted by EspadaInMyCloset

Of course, as me and Jesus of Suburbia have found, the WR thread is a great place for infinite inspiration . What is it Oriadis found? Hmmm.....gah......

Yes, all it takes is one serious post.

I pulled out the top drawer.

It was simply a plate of steel, as were all the rest.

The file cabinet was a facade.

~ The Oriadis

Originally Posted by Xedan

I pulled out the top drawer.

It was simply a plate of steel, as were all the rest.

The file cabinet was a facade.

~ The Oriadis

Tis' frustrating.

My god, I never finished this? Now that I've forgotten my story too, no one will ever know the end, not even me. A damn shame.

Damn so I read all that for nothing?

Hey, I WROTE all of that for nothing!

You should start it up again, it has a nice form to it.

Son, I am disappoint...

Originally Posted by Sentaku

Son, I am disappoint...

This.