Thread: My dotted thoughts and an inspired idea.

First, an introduction to my thread.

I'm no writer and have little experience in writing, but i shall post random little sentences here which cross my mind and anything you wish to comment on, give tips or even improve feel free.

All inspired by music and dreams. Thread inspired by Izreal's improved post on an earlier thread i made so thanks

Escape into paradise: Inspired by a dream.

I open my eyes to see the glistening stars covered faintly by a moving cloud, the whisper of the shallow waves washes away the silence. The sand seeping between my toes with a tickling sensation is almost as light as the water wrapping around my legs, a warm breeze gently brushes back my hair and spraying the salty ocean mist onto my body.
As a look around me, the ocean water escapes from this world once again; taking my mind with it.