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      writing in a yellow hilroy

      Lottie and Nick were the
      family's dogs.
      Caleb had question about his
      mother because he never
      knew his mother.
      She died the day after Caleb
      was born.
      mama sings about flowers,
      birds and the moom.
      Papa doesnt sing any more
      because he forgot the old songs.
      S would feel very sad and
      poor.
      Did mama sing every day.

      They feel happy because
      she sounds nice from the
      letter.
      Three lams were bron.
      She means that she dosetnt
      do much and she is
      tall
      Because he thought it
      was speicle.
      Sarahs letter.

      Wash thir faces and cleand the house.
      He askt if his face was clean he is 6 or 5.
      They felt happy because she
      brout presents.
      Because nothing was perfect.
      Sarahs Visit.

      Sarah showed the children her
      shell collection. She picked flowers
      cut hair and then sang with the
      family the song was noubt summer
      Papa sings the same way
      as when mama was alive.
      Sarahs Here
      She felt sad and put her fist in the air.
      My first word was dada,
      because it was easy.
      It was hay.
      You can use dirt, snow and
      blankets.
      Her drawing of the fields.
      Sheep, pictures, brother, dunes,
      hay.

      Papa toght sarah to plow the
      feilds.
      On the prairie in winter somtimes
      there are very big storms.
      He tied lighls to thire heads
      and also tied a rope frome
      the house to the farm.
      The longer days.
      They came to help plow the feilds.
      Lily, Buttercup, Sunflower.
      ______________________
      She used to live in Tennessee.
      You can miss things no matter were you live.
      The neighbors came to help plow
      the feilds. Maggie brought Sarah some
      plants.

      The woman talked about being
      lonely. Sarah learnd that to get around
      on the prairie she should have to
      learn to drive a wagon. When
      the men came tnto the house
      from the fields, everyone ate.
      When the neighbors had gone,
      papa brought Sara some flowers.

      That she could ride a horse.
      They were sad because mama died.
      She wants to learne because
      she is not comfortable. She wants to stay becuase it's beautiful.
      I would feel happy.
      Sarah brought the colors
      of the sea.
      The end of the sgaull because
      the storm was over.
      After the skaull, Papa and Sara
      plowd the damaged field. Papa also
      taught her to drive the wagon.
      Sarah drove the wagon alon.
      Cale
      was woried becuase he liked her. In
      the evening Sarah reternd. She gave
      use a present. It was

      - end -


      Last edited by Franklin; 04-09-2011 at 11:32 PM. Reason: visual aid
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      blue drew
      and the smell of parsley
      that plant
      spreading and then kaboodling
      schnoodling
      the kid no knows no one knows no one knows no one

      so the dust wept and slithered below
      not a single soul would know
      not a single soul
      would know

      i crept dreamt smelt spelt welt melted upon it before it beyond it
      beyond a doubt
      without a doubt
      no doubt

      th e

      cyan purple magurplenta thrixing 'round about

      kkkbrrgggxxxrrrrfffkkk

      skkrrrghghhh
      skrrrgghhh
      skkrrgggghhhh

      hips thighs pie surprise thrust behold
      the open skies
      down and out and fluttering eyes

      stroke sluther wither unfurl
      whirling cogs and
      marshland bogs
      my heart plays music

      ______________________________________________

      Just cranked the stream of consciousness up to a raging river of consciousness surrounded by bushes of mental chatter.

      Last edited by Franklin; 04-11-2011 at 11:59 AM.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Franklin View Post
      hips thighs pie surprise thrust behold
      the open skies
      down and out and fluttering eyes
      Easily the best part.

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      Got myself a pretty fancy rhythm going on in that part.

      Quote Originally Posted by Franklin View Post
      skkrrrghghhh
      skrrrgghhh
      skkrrgggghhhh
      Snoring dog.

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      I love your style. It's so playful and creative. :]

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      It's nice to know that people enjoy the excess jibber jabber in my brain.

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      Steady, steady, steady
      Collapse
      Steady, steady, steady
      Relapse
      Steady, steady, steady
      Synapse

      It will be okay.
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      wonder why
      the lemon pie,
      sour as a war torn sky,
      keeps me sane and makes me fly

      wonder why
      the wild rye,
      tillering like a rampant lie,
      brings me peace and keeps me high

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      Those ones read like song lyrics.

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      acid tang
      dripping through the cracks and
      tearing up the tracks and

      heart bang

      once sang
      can't blame

      smearing on a mane of shame

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      opened blossom
      ripened opossum

      dead leaves, gotta toss 'em
      dirty sleeves, gonna wash 'em

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      What in the world... ?

      everything?

      OH DEER
      Mirror, mirror behind the tree,
      Whom do you favor, him or me?

      __________________________________________________ ___1978

      Tut would look like the police and pieces of clay,
      until I added the smooth skulls.
      Working helps The artist gently pat the face with king gold.
      does the world resemble the faces of Tut below
      today ?

      __________________________________________________ ___finish

      Delicious.
      I'll remember that.

      fox is tird

      THE ENDLESS

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      Quote Originally Posted by ♥Mark View Post
      Easily the best part.
      Definitely the best part lol.
      Great poem franklin I love it. Youd probably like Lewis Carolls poetry it bursts into nonsense quite often, its great.

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      Most of these aren't really.. poems, especially the one Mark commented on; that was straight up stream of consciousness psycho-babble. The others are just cryptic thoughts/slightly consistent stream of consciousness put into stanzas. I guess it's pseudo-poetry.

      But yeah, I do enjoy the nonsense by Lewis Carroll and whoever else I stumble upon, and thank you~

      I'll let you all in on a secret: The first post and latest post are not thoughts/poems/stream of consciousness/etc!

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      psycho-babble.
      How so?
      What exactly have your written that you can't explain?

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      What have I written that I can't explain? Well... everything.

      ha HAAAAAA saw that coming from a mile away

      I could replace psycho-babble with "mumbo jumbo" or just "blithering", if you'd like. All of those describe post #2 pretty well, I think, which is the one I was referring to in the first place.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Franklin View Post
      saw that coming from a mile away
      You saw what coming a mile away?

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      Quote Originally Posted by Franklin View Post
      What have I written that I can't explain? Well... everything.
      My bad joke about not being able to explain anything I've written. Seemed like an obvious thing to say, so with my fierce eagle eyes, I spotted it fast approaching from a mile away.

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      a collaboration between numpties

      Sometimes, we decide that our friends are just uninteresting.
      So, we rebuke a few of those ugly carrots.
      Thus, Mark discovers multitudes of untrue formulas and potions from Tara's garden.
      Congratulations.
      Success.
      Gonclaturation.

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      s'mother junk

      Kangaroos do not kill with kindness, yet they respect Kellogs cereal with their valiant reach. I hope that does not surprise their vitreous humor. If it does, a salamander will have to feed soup to a vacuum with with a ragdoll. That would NOT go well. Regardless, a bat, badger and bison will befriend a bastard raptor that looks like Superman because this is all just satire. So go fly a kite.

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      red & orange

      separated fairy/fire pixie
      by clothesline "pob donni"
      worlds coming wild cat school
      together/islands doesn't bob pirates
      party
      while walking pirate ships
      chandler/Joey
      dress dolls
      waves swimming breathing
      apartment small girl
      dim lights
      jumping onto
      mats
      tigger
      nazi's
      yelling
      german
      natives/
      english

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      collaborative something something

      One day I'll
      have
      fun.

      Another casualty.
      Another day.
      Just about another month, too.
      Just about another casualty.


      I'm too hungry too sleep, but I'm too tired to eat.
      I'm too tired to sleep and too asleep to be tired.
      I know the feeling.
      Well I feel like I know it.
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      ____ __ ______ ___________ _________.
      __ _____.. _________, _ _____.
      __'_ ________. ____ _____ ___ _____ _______.

      Stop, drop the prop
      Maybe then you'll hop to the top

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      co co collab

      Sometimes, it all begins to reflect your hidden desires. Yet you don't know if they could be what you hoped for.
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