Thread: Returned again: After You (new song)

I feel slightly silly always coming back here to just post my songs... but I need to share them with some people! haha i hope its not too much to put up with me. Anyway, this one I wrote for a girl. I know it sounds coldplayish, but none of its copied. Also, I'm just getting over a cold, and as you'll notice because of that had a little trouble with the high notes, but it's not bad. You'll for sure get a good sense of the tune from it.

Song.

Lyrics:

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which way through your eyes
would you notice if I tried to get inside
well everything's a sign, and it's alright
cuz in every passive glance I'd find a smile

which way to the sky
am I low or are you just that high
you would feel it if you'd lie with me tonight
so i'll wait down here a while before i fly

your skin reflects
my indirect
attempts
lets cut from now to then
im wonderin, just when
how can i waste my time
just drawing lines
for you
i hope you find this true
cuz i'm coming after you

which way will you find
that there's longing behind these eyes I hide
when everything's just right I'll make a sign
just don't let that time slip by cuz I can hide

your skin reflects
my indirect
attempts
lets cut from now to then
im wonderin, just when
i'll find the peace of mind
to try and get this right
how can i waste our time
just drawing lines
right through

your eyes grew
dont hide up in blue

i hope you see my view
i'm tired of placing clues
and i hope you find this true
cuz i'm coming after you[list]

Thanks for listening... don't be shy to say something, positive or negative. I do, of course, expect SOME feedback.

Dylan