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    1. 08-20-2004 09:43 PM #1
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      no title

      Trapped in time, Im a particle in my head
      I can't exist...I cant be dead
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    2. 08-20-2004 11:02 PM #2
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      Hmmm... maybe call it "I Can't Be"... or is it called "no title"


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    3. 08-21-2004 04:55 AM #3
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      its nto called anything. It has no title.
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    4. 08-21-2004 09:22 AM #4
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      Originally posted by gameover
      its nto called anything. It has no title.
      I would have called the poem a paradox.
      Are you dreaming?
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    5. 08-21-2004 05:50 PM #5
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      Well that is the feel of it. But until some title comes to me that I actually like, it has no title.
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    6. 08-21-2004 05:56 PM #6
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      maybe the best thing would be to leave it untitled... cool little phrase though
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    7. 08-22-2004 10:41 AM #7
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      It's more like a haiku than a poem.
      The best times of your life should not be when you're still so young, or else you'll live a life always dreaming of the past.

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    8. 08-22-2004 06:32 PM #8
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      Just off by three syllables, of course.

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations
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    9. 08-22-2004 09:49 PM #9
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      add

      by (1 syllable) gameover (2 syllabels) to the end! Then you're done!
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