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      The Perfect Human

      The perfect human
      would not sleep,
      The perfect human,
      he could not eat.
      The perfect human
      would never cry,
      The perfect human,
      he could not die.
      The perfect human
      would not be irate,
      The perfect human,
      he could not hate.
      The perfect human,
      is not seen,
      The perfect human,
      is but a dream.

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      I like the way this is structured. Could be longer though, Something perfect is always a dream. the perfect human...is but a dream. So true. Good work, needs to be longer though. You should make a pt.2 of it or something. If the perfect human could not hate...could he love? How would the perfect human be a he? A male? Anyways like I just mentioned you should make a pt.2 of it. Otherwise it's pretty cool man.


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      I was considering about the length, but I figured, "This can get a bit repetitive". Thank you for your comments, though!

      I don't know about a Part II. Perhaps. But somethings things are better left to the reader to imagine

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      Here. I decided to post another:


      What is a memory?

      A memory is not heard,
      but in the head it dances.
      A memory is like a bird,
      a simple thought that prances.

      But when a memory is lost,
      The thought becomes a pilot.
      For a memory is not a thought,
      but a treasure that is guided.

      Take your memories for granted,
      and they'll crash into the ground.
      Take your memories for granted,
      and you'll find they can't be found.

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      Excellent man. Just plain Brilliant. You probaly can't describe memories better than that. After I read it I stopped what I was doing for a moment and thought of my memories. Good and Bad. I'm gonna print that out and tape to the inside of my journal if you don't mind. (it is your work after all) Keep them coming man. :bravo:


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      No problem man! Just put my user name after 'em, and I won't care in the least.

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      Limits

      While some may fill the glass

      half full,

      and others--

      half empty,

      I will fill the glass three times, and overfill it
      plenty.
      But even here I limit, my truest aspirations--
      For the greatest of the greats, had true imagination.
      For while we pour so slowly, in increments so small,
      The greatest of the greats, smam in the




      waterfall.

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      i like it its reall y is a simple poem to write but u make it so deep ya know? i like it!

      "There are two types of people in this world, people who think there are two types of people, and people who don't."

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      The Dealer
      ____

      "Hahaha" says the dealer,
      as he deals the night away.
      With arms stretched he takes the colors,
      and throws them in fire.

      "Hahaha" says the dealer,
      as you feel the hearth of day.
      With feet unfurled you cloud the lovers,
      and catch the open flyer.

      "Hahaha" says the loser,
      as he sinks like solid clay.
      With palms closed he breaks the covers,
      and feels his eyes close tired.

      ------

      It has a closely related concept to it. Try to think.

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      ___________

      Da perfect cereal
      would never expire
      Da perect cereal
      would never get soggy
      Da perfect cereal
      would never get stale
      Da perfect cereal
      would taste fucking awesome
      Da perfect cereal
      it would have no color
      Da perfect cereal
      could not make a mess
      Da perfect cereal
      would taste like sunshine and rainbow dust
      Da perfect cereal
      does not exist
      Because
      Da perfect cereal
      is in my stomach
      ______________

      PS: I'm not mocking you, just couldn't resist Good poem, anyways.

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      Originally posted by wasup
      would taste fucking awesome
      HAHAHA

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      I do what I can

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