 Originally Posted by Shift
:bravo::bravo::bravo: Bravo, bravo!!! Very well done, great sources, and well presented, it states the facts nicely 
Thanks a lot, Shift!
Hmm, peer review... presentation-wise, it looks like a huge block of text. I was totally motivated to read it, but my normal response to things like this is "  omg do I really have to read all that?" Maybe add some color, differentiate between the headings, that could make it a bit more digestible.
Also, I don't see a lot of noobs reading this in depth, especially not the younger ones or those who aren't used to the sciences or any other instances where they are reading things like this often. Maybe make a dup copy of it, the sort of 'dumbed down' version if you will.
I totally see your point, and I was kind of worried about this when I wrote it. This is why I tried to separate the text into two levels consisting of the main article and the notes and references, in the hope that most people would at least read the first part. Maybe I could try to make the main text more compact and move more stuff into the notes and references section.
I think pictures could help. Maybe a diagram of a sleep cycle, showing where you should be expecting these things to occur. In fact if you'd like, I could help work on something like this. I am not exactly ace with sleep cycles, but as far as coming up with little image and presenting it, that I would definitely love to do.
Sounds good to me, if you want to do it.
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