Thread: Addendum to the RC Tutorial... could you help critique?

Habitual Reality Checking Habitually

In addition, however, reality checking habitually can lead you to do reality checks in your dreams, likely because it is the focus of so much attention that it causes you to dream about your cues.


that part sounds like a run on sentence...how about:

In addition, checking habitually can lead you to reality checks in your dreams. It's more likely to happen because it's the focus of your attention, causing you to dream about your cues.



Other than that, the part where you mention "DJ" should be typed out in it's entirety...you know for people that may have read about this before anything else related to dreaming.

And on a side note, I love that you bought up the fact that RCing is still useful for failed WILD attempts. I've gotten a good deal of DILDs because of that. Good work shift...good effing work.