Thread: My Compositions! Mostly strings and stuff. Let me now what you think of them.

I figured that instead of starting a new thread I'd post my new videos in this thread even though they don't necessarily relate to the title of this thread... since they're not all my compositions... some are covers.

I've been working a bit on my vocals since I never have really sung a lot... I have improved a bit, but I've got a long way to go yet. Any constructive crit is appreciated as it'll help me progress.

p.s. I posted two versions of the same song... so if you could take the time to let me know which you like better, and why! If not, no big deal.

You Don't Care - Original
YouTube - You don't care - Original Song

And there is no time
to consider the consequences of fights
and there is no one
who can take the time to care...
for us... and our friends
to mend them would be just absurd.

You take all the people that hurt
and tell them to keep it in
but you, know better
than that
than that

But you
don't care
at all

And thats
why I
will go
away
from you

A Corner - Cover (John Frusciante)
YouTube - A Corner (Frusciante) - Cover

We Don't Try - Cover (Chris Garneau) [Two versions!!]
I'll probably re-do these ones 'cause I know I can do better... so I'll probably post a new one in a while.
v.1.0 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5inMzBjNtSU
v.2.0 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YoUIQIu9dCw

You say you wanna die
'cause the things don't work out right,
But you don't even try,
though neither do i

And neither do my friends,
though some of them pretend,
and it's easy if you cry,
cos you feel bad for yourself.

I think about my friend who died,
And how her kids didn't get to say goodbye,
though neither did i,
no neither did i.

And neither did my friends,
though some of them pretend,
and its easy if you cry,
cos you feel bad for yourself.

If you pretend everythings fine,
i won't hurt myself or lie,
to you or mom or dad,
just pretend that i'm not sad.

And we'll work everthing out,
even all the stuff we don't talk about,
it would be easier if we cried,
we'd feel bad for ourself's.

It's supposed to snow tonight,
I hope the forecast is right,
cos in the morning i sleep in till i like,
and if it snowed outiside it would feel so nice in here