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      Death Poetry

      Sweet times, urging death, I taunt her
      Saying "With your direst breath
      will you please haunt me", and yet she apprehends me and
      she smiles at my laughs. Hard not to Love her...
      Sweet Death, Who would have thought?

      Oh No I told you before, death, I love you, tooo, tooo sweet,
      when, oh when shall we meet...?
      In the meantime = I Love life, but you are always my betrothed...

      One Autumn day, I was absorbed in a leaf
      the color of a heart
      Almost red, and ready to fall down

      Spending time and asking it's existence
      I realized it as mother and daughter
      of the tree combined

      Such sweet subsistence!!
      Sweet snowfalls followed
      My heart entwined

      Too purely real to be real
      but it was
      Sweet subsistence true

      And they just asked
      if she was real

      And I just asked
      And you?

      compassion
      suffer
      them
      offer

      accept
      gift
      returned
      unwrapped

      angel
      cried
      try
      more

      Fantasies over-ride and dreams enchant with lovely themes
      beyond any thoughts that could be thought
      the world bespeaks of right and wrong
      and it seems to be that, "naw" it can't be that

      So where does it all lead? Carried on by non-thoughts
      with non-understandings, Moving along
      carried along by the winds of the Universes' songs
      Wandering on by letting loose of poor ego's wants

      Maybe then there are new thoughts to be thought?

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      Torrents of flooding emotions
      You seek to overwhelm me?
      But don't you see I welcome
      you from the very depths of my heart?

      Currents of those bloody notions
      You trees of the forest,
      You seek to overcome the Sun?
      But don't you see that this cannot be done?

      So many ones, gone on, dying over and over
      In the world not knowing but a body, a personality
      they cling to words, ideas both sweet and sour
      I cried for them at first, but my tears were worthless
      grains of salt and nothing more
      Experiencing not the beauties
      Emptiness of love they are
      Offered life, they choose the sorrows...

      Please take my smile and share
      There is more than enough for everyone

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      Retrosummary (For my Ego written)

      I've heard your words too many times
      I let them sink not into my mind
      That is why today
      there is freedom's semblance

      Not so erudite as may be liked
      but me no buy all the tricks
      you want to instill
      upon this mind

      Me like Freedom so much more
      So very Very Rudimentary

      The white webs and tracelets of the transient clouds, the portion of the moon I see tonight-
      It is pretty quiet out here in the country
      The clattering of the many minds makes such a loud and clanging sound
      I used to hate that sound, but now I smile

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      Dark
      so dark
      and empty
      like a cup
      with nothing in
      I cry
      because I'm sad
      but nobody cares
      not even the blackness
      or my goldfish
      Cold
      so cold
      like the wind
      when it's cold
      Deep
      deep
      deep
      sadness, blackness
      really deep
      oh dear

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      Frantic thoughts of afterlife's gloom
      Shadows creep from the corner of the room
      Thanatos, the sunset on the horizon, looms
      As a thief in the darkest night, death will come soon.

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      Do this do that
      an infinite list of rules
      there are no rules, free your mind
      I'm not one of your fucked up fascist kind!
      A slave in a little spikey box
      no YOU get a job

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      Infinite Warriors on an Infinite Road (by Mayflow)

      Within the leaves of the weeping Willow tree, I saw her hair a-flowing
      She was young and She was old, but her heart was all I could see
      and it was GLOWING

      I wondered "How can a being like this be?"
      Her eyes were sometimes Bright and knowing
      and sometimes were as dark as the darkest seas

      and she said "Let's dive beneath the ocean's floor!"
      I couldn't help but Love her no matter what she meant
      and so I followed her through her hidden door

      and when I did, her Heart gained laughter and her
      voice was like the wind and then she sternly voiced to me
      that this journey could never end
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      Death so sweet = Life so sweet.
      Last edited by Mayflow; 08-21-2011 at 10:38 AM.

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      Life.
      I hate it.
      Dragging yourself through days
      Amusing myself in so many ways
      To make the time I have go faster
      Wonder what will come after
      That makes us so eager to spend our time
      Ways to make it fly by
      So that death can arrive a little bit sooner.
      Life.
      I hate it.

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      Are you asleep and imagining you're reading this or imagining you're asleep and actually reading this?
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      Life is like a shoe; useless without a soul.

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      Quote Originally Posted by ItsMEE View Post
      Life.
      I hate it.
      Dragging yourself through days
      Amusing myself in so many ways
      To make the time I have go faster
      Wonder what will come after
      That makes us so eager to spend our time
      Ways to make it fly by
      So that death can arrive a little bit sooner.
      Life.
      I hate it.

      Lovely.

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      this should be in Artists corner

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      So this is it
      One thing remains
      Slice...
      Sever...
      In a single motion, the tenuous bond is cut
      Deliverance from the pan
      Gullet's fire awaits
      Excellent acrostic

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      LOL THIS GOT MoVED!

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      Quote Originally Posted by Xei View Post
      So this is it
      One thing remains
      Slice...
      Sever...
      In a single motion, the tenuous bond is cut
      Deliverance from the pan
      Gullet's fire awaits
      Excellent acrostic
      Acrostic awaited and assimilated!

      Nice poem btw. :-)

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      The Dance of the Dead

      I dreamed a dream of a dream-maker true
      and I asked if the dream were true
      and the dream-maker asked of me
      "AND, Whom are you?"

      Enlightenment pulsated right through my veins
      and verily enchanted my human brain
      "I AM THAT I AM" He said, but then took the
      form of a Butterfly instead, and then invited me

      to the dance of the dead ...

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