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      Double Life

      This story is pretty much a rip off of Assassin's Creed but in a new sense. It involves a kid in modern times living the assassin life when he sleeps. It all makes sense when you read it. I also tried to keep it original and not stuff like "Templar" and "The Brotherhood". If people like it I will write more chapters. It's just for fun anyway






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      I know the story isn't great, but when I'm relaxing before I go to sleep it gives me something to do.

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      These are great the first one was a bit cheesy but written well, keep 'em coming.
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      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      Thanks, its fun to see that some people are reading the story. I'll keep the chapters coming


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      Wait is that Ashley or the evil chick confortie?
      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      Sorry, I could've explained it a little better. Ashley is Ms. Conforite.

      The only other girl is Jenny and she is in the Real Life World.

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      This chapter seems a little more interesting. Thanks for reading.

      Oh, and the first chapter was kind of like the past of the main character. This takes place a little while after. It will be explained in the other chapters soon, which will be longer after this one.



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      This reminds me of the first time I played ac1 and was like "Wait all I have to do it hold 2 buttons and altair will do all of this crazy shit?!?" good read thanks for posting
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      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      Haha, I loved ac1. Altair IMO, was way better than Ezio. Anyway, I usually post a chapter a day now since I write 2 chapters before I go to sleep. Its enjoyable and relaxing.




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      Chapter 6 here, and thanks to all who are reading!



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      You should write me in somehow I would be an expert at hand to hand combat but always saying random things and no one would take me seriously (the way I am irl) These are awesome btw

      [EDIT] Yeah Ezio was cool but Altair had a lot of personal growth, Ezio did as well when he learned not to take revenge but... I don't know altair was always cooler to me. (don't get me wrong though Ezio is a badass)
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      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      You're Alex Dawson in this story ooflendoodle. This one has a little more action, and is a little more into the story.

      P.S. Anybody who wants to be in the story can message me. I will post your characters on here if you'd like.

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      Dude that's awesome
      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      Thanks man

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      Here it is, Chapter 8. Sorry that this chapter is a bit boring, but I couldn't find a good way to make it entertaining without combining it with the next chapter. I also like to keep it short for the convenience. Oh well, it's more like a filler chapter anyway. The next chapter gets much better...



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      So how long are you planning to make this?
      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      Not sure, I'll definitely finish it with a proper ending sometime but idk what chapter it'll end on. The chapters are like micro-chapters though so it'll reach around 30 or more hopefully (from previous writings).

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      I will definitely try to get a chapter on here today, but I have to write a report for English so I can't say that there will be one. Tomorrow I will be getting clothes for homecoming and on Saturday is homecoming and I'm staying at a friends house. Don't worry though, between now and Saturday there will be a chapter! Ill keep you updated!

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      I can't function without chachachachaptttttttttttttttterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr *shuts down*
      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      Haha, I decided to go shopping today so I'm free tomorrow unless I go to a football game. I have a chapter 1/3 of the way written so it shouldn't take long. Now I have to do that report

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      Here it is! Chapter 9 has arrived! I'll try for another chapter by or on Sunday! Thanks for the reading and support!



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      Get to da prisoner!!!!!!!
      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      As you wish. I woke up at about 9 today, don't have to leave until 6 so I decided to write this
      Chapter 10!




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      Nice I like them but don't feel like you have to do anything just because of me.
      "For a long time it gave me nightmares, having to witness an injustice like that. It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be, I can still hear them taunting him. 'Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids!'... How come they just couldn't give him some cereal?"

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      Nah, its cool. I love to write and during the school year I don't have much to do. I live in a neighborhood with a bunch of 8 year-olds and since I'm only 15 I can't drive out to friends yet. On the weekends I usually go someplace but Monday through Friday is like painting a gray wall with gray paint. School is fun (without the work ).

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