Thread: [Film] Lucidity

So here is the short film I made for my year 12 Media class about lucid dreaming . I'll be the first to admit it probably could be improved but I think I did a decent job of it. Let me know what you guys think.

PS Soz for not featuring dreamviews , didn't know if I was allowed or not hehe.
Also my twin is the main actor soooooo

Excellent job. I really liked the music/sound effects. You did a good job of making it obvious when the main character was reality check as well and I liked that.

I think that you could have done a little more with the nightmare/dreaming state, say getting another actor to play a 'nightmare'. Give them a rubber knife and a hockey mask, make them like a psycho killer or something. Or, if you have the ability to do so, some special effects.

Nice one, BlairBros!
I really liked it . I like the fact that he's using LD to overcome nightmares, one of the great advantages of it. And the process of learning it has been well written.
I agree with JadeGreen in that it would have been even better to have a more dramatic nightmare, although the music makes it good, by using another actor/s.

Congratulations!

thanks for watching! I agree that having another actor for the nghtmare would have been good but I wasn't that organised and only had a limited time so I decided not to bother, which in hindsight was a bit silly, but can't be helped now . Also apologies for my brothers poor acting lol