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    Thread: Lucid Dream inspired Novel (Intro only)

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      Lucid Dream inspired Novel (Intro only)

      To travel by sea to the next destination
      Hawaii and all of the asian pacific islands
      New Zealand, Japan
      Reaching through to India and The East Africa Coast
      The Arabian Desert and all it's mystical treasures
      Resting place of Egyptian Kings and Princes. Pharohs
      And the Pacific itself has it's own treasures
      Sunken deep beneath the surface
      Gigantic ships full of skeletons, treasures, secrets
      Whales the size of sky scrapers
      Not to mention the lost cities very much still alive and bustling
      Technologies developed and primitive beyond our imagination
      Then there are the Mermaids, mermen, who rule these places.
      In eachothers eyes we see magicians yet in our own eyes, there is method
      And what about on land? In the closed off mountains and in the deep sea volcanoes
      Especially those that have sunken deep into the earth. Below the sea.
      Here are the dragons, the Fire people living on close terms with Atlantis
      A society beyond our human reach
      So far anyway.
      Could that have changed on this adventure?
      A man, captain of the first Great Submarine Expedition
      All eyes on deck searching attentively for one treasure
      May perhaps stumble upon another
      Much greater
      Much wilder
      Treasure
      In that century we thought we knew everything there was to know
      In that century our eyes stopped glistening at the thought of romance, adventures, and treasures
      We thought there was nothing left to call us out to sea...


      Thank God for these ten people who, for mostly a whim of a reason, thought the rest of us were wrong.
      If it weren't for them, the Earth may have forgotten about those legendary magical creatures
      The ones that were the final missing key to the Paradise Transfiguration,
      The Humans

      Emperors of Life

      Before that tale can be told well
      An unfolding of that first Human Emperor should be told.
      That first Human Emperor, Munich Conquiste
      Mama?

      Good Morning Munich, finally out of bed now are you? Well, come on now

      Are we dreaming Mama?

      Munich. You're very much awake and you'll be late if you don't eat your breakfast first.

      Ok, is it still a dream even though we're awake?

      Munich..you stop playing those game and eat your breakfast or you'll be late.

      As Munich sat there, eating his vegetables and such, his mother left to shovel the snow and start the car. Munich wished his food would turn into strawberry cake. And although it sat there, unchanged in appearance, he ate it anyway. And as if it was a dream, the vegetable stew he had that morning for breakfast tasted, maybe just a hint, like strawberry cake. And so, at the age of 7, the seventh Human Emperor maybe just a little bit, started to wake.


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      Totally inspired by my love of LDing and One Piece
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      So …what exactly is this?
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      a combination of words: art
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      Sounds like an interesting theme. Makes me feel like writing a written story too. Something that could help your readers though is writing the action more. Like whats going on, what do we see before they start talking. For example,When the boy said mama I was confused and thought that was apart of his name. XD
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      It is really more of a poem. I like it a lot. Are you planning on writing the entire novel in this format?
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      Thanks DawnEye-DreamCafe XD

      And Jade, hmm Beowulf style? that sounds interesting. I actually wrote this a long ago off of a whim but found it while searching an old USB stick

      I could have a lot of fun with this if I tried
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      I was going to say; It might be fun to write, but it would also be tiring to read. I tried to read the Iliad once and regretted it. The entire book is a poem (and while it's not bad) it's exhausting to get through. I'm not saying don't do it. It's your story and you can create it however you want.

      Though I am cautioning you that it can sometimes make the story much more difficult to grasp than it should be for some readers. If you want my recommendation on how to include poems, use them to bolster the story, not tell it.

      Keep going on the story, though. I can't wait to hear more.
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