We ain't running no more
We ain't running no more
We ain't running no more
Somebody better tell these suckers
We ain't backing down no more
We ain't backing down no more
We ain't backing down no more
Ima show them that I am the master of my lucid dreams
(REPEAT 2 TIMES)
The next time I fight a street guy bigger than me I will never run again
I am the master of my dreams
I am the man
I will bang who I want anywhere on the weekend
If my principal catch me smoking dro in his office when he walk in the door
I ain't running away like a scary cat
If things get out of control I'll pull my gat
gotta watch my back a nightmarish dude will creep up on you
What he gonna do?
This is a lucid dream!
I got that killer tool
I control this :tropicalboxer:
Destroy him with fire from the palm of hands
He disappear
He cease to exist
We ain't running no more
We ain't running no more
We ain't running no more
Somebody better tell these suckers
We ain't backing down no more
We ain't backing down no more
We ain't backing down no more
ima show them that I am the master of my lucid dreams
(REPEAT 2 TIMES)
If my principal catch me smoking dro in his office when he walk in the door
I ain't running away like a scary cat
Your rap is great, except this line seems kinda out of place. (I mean maybe you had a specific dream about getting in trouble for smoking in your principal's office and want to convey your message about that, but it seems out of the place with the rest of the song.)
I think you should keep working on this, perhaps extend it. I think it would make a great full song if you could get some more substance and narrative to it. My friend says a lot of the best rap is about inner struggle and coming to terms with things you've experienced. Lucid dreaming and specifically overcoming nightmares is just that. (Also major brownie points for not just throwing a bunch of profanities in there for no reason.)
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