COEXISTANCE |
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COEXISTANCE |
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Interesting to say the least... |
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Early Morning Moment,
A Glimpse of Joy,
But soon it's Over, and I return to Dust...
Wow that was indeed intresting. I think the rhyming perfectly convinces the reader that it is a person that is talking with his/her own head. It flows nice. |
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I thought it was great, highly creative and the rhymes blended in perfectly instead of hindering the message as a whole... |
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If I hadn't made me
I'd be more inclined to bow
Powers that be would have swallowed me up
But that's more than I can allow...
Very good! Loved it! |
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" my dreams they aren't as empty as my conscience seems to be"
ADOPTED BY NARUTO
yay, a poem not about love or morbidness lol ;p good stuff |
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Sweet, Good work. |
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