Thread: I think you, my fellow reader, are writing your DJ entries all wrong!! A tip for writing DJ entries.

When you write a DJ, you write what happens in the dream, right?

Then i walked up to the store and entered. A girl there said that i should buy some Dr Pepper. I found some then left. All of a sudden, i was being chased by a BIG RED monster O_O. he chased me through a forest. I soon escaped

Well, from what you/ I have learned from ADA, you should write what happens with all 5 or your senses and your emotions. So, let me fix that DJ example

Then i walked up to the store with grey walls and one dirty window and entered. An ugly girl there said that i should buy some Dr Pepper. I found some next to a tennis racket and a rusty metal rod then left. All of a sudden, i was being chased by a BIG RED monster with sharp fangs and a loud roar. He was on 2 legs and had scaly skin O_O. he chased me through a forest with lush flowers and beautiful grass, the grass crunching with every step i took. I was terrified. My legs were hurting as i ran through the dense forest. I soon escaped

Noticed how i incorporated most of the senses into that example? If you do this in your DJ entries, you might get better results with dream recall with more vivid dreams involving more of your senses and better detail.