I just read your dream. You have comments disabled on your dream journal though, so I'll comment here!

What a fantastic first dream. Your dream control skills are amazing and the dream itself sounds so cool! I love the first part with Rachel, her telling you to figure it out and snapping your fingers haha aw man that's really neat.
I'm going to have to try your phone trick too! I can tell you right now, you are already a very talented lucid dreamer and you are going to keep getting better and better at inducing them.
Thanks for sharing it with us and congratulations on your first lucid dream! I hope you keep sharing more on here.