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    1. 05-29-2011 07:24 AM #1
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      Help me with this sentence!

      Aunt, when you pass away in disappointment and your consciousness vanishes, when no supernatural return of any kind occurs within the next two-thousand years, and when Christianity slowly suffocates itself out of human concern; you and all of the ignorant, judgmental, delusional, and perpetually intoxicated constituents of Christianity will no longer bow to anyone or anything as a result of the worldwide realization:

      There is no god.

      I know that the semi-colon is being misused because the first sentence isn't an independent clause so please help me! I just want help fixing this sentence up.
    2. 05-29-2011 12:19 PM #2
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      Aunt, when you pass away in disappointment does your consciousness vanishe? Is there no supernatural return of any kind within the next two-thousand years? And when satanism slowly suffocates itself out of human concern; you and all of the ignorant, judgmental, delusional, and perpetually intoxicated constituents of satan will no longer bow to anyone or anything as a result of the worldwide realization:

      There is no satan.

      How was it?
    3. 05-29-2011 02:44 PM #3
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      Aunt, I want your death to as miserable as my life.

      I'm not very clever.
    4. 07-13-2015 08:52 AM #4
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      Aunt, I have always somewhat found you attractive.
      Also I hope you burn in hell you witch
      wisdom is knowing I'm nothing
      Love is knowing I'm everything
      And between the two my life moves
    5. 07-13-2015 10:39 PM #5
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