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    1. 10-22-2008 03:24 AM #1
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      Haiku tiem?

      This is where I stand
      Insignificant to you
      Insignificant



      Fail?
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    2. 10-22-2008 03:28 AM #2
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      This is a haiku.
      It is made of ass and poo.
      It's a sandwich too.
      Abraxas

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      I murdered someone, there was bloody everywhere. On the walls, on my hands. The air smelled metallic, like iron. My mouth... tasted metallic, like iron. The floor was metallic, probably iron
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    3. 10-22-2008 03:31 AM #3
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      Quote Originally Posted by Abra View Post
      This is a haiku.
      It is made of ass and poo.
      It's a sandwich too.
      Woah. Contractions. I bow to the mastuh.
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    4. 10-22-2008 03:49 AM #4
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      How did I forget
      My thumb wrapped in bubble gum?
      It makes me so mad

      Everything works out in the end, sometimes even badly.

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    5. 10-22-2008 03:58 AM #5
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      Is that dangerous
      wondering what has gone wrong
      I know, your a butt.
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    6. 10-22-2008 04:03 AM #6
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      Why does a dog cry
      Only when you get it alone
      And beat it to death?

      I have a spoon now
      But there's no where to put it
      Here's to forever

      Everything works out in the end, sometimes even badly.

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    7. 10-22-2008 06:22 PM #7
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      what are you talkin about
      do i really have to shout aloud?
      come on seriously dudes yeah...
      War never solved anything... except slavery, oppression, genocide, communism, fascism, and nazism
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      The reason people don't like questioning their beliefs is because it threatens their inner security. People have a habit of looking for what only comforts them.
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    8. 10-22-2008 07:06 PM #8
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      Quote Originally Posted by aorozco View Post
      what are you talkin about
      do i really have to shout aloud?
      come on seriously dudes yeah...
      You sir, fail.
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    9. 10-22-2008 08:42 PM #9
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      Today I met him
      He was taller on TV
      Barack Obama
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    10. 10-22-2008 08:46 PM #10
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      Quote Originally Posted by poog View Post
      Today I met him
      He was taller on TV
      Barack Obama
      You are a liar
      Obama does not exist
      Why must you lie so?
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    11. 10-22-2008 08:49 PM #11
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      Quote Originally Posted by Sandform View Post
      You are a liar
      Obama does not exist
      Why must you lie so?
      You are right, I lied
      It was a poster cut-out
      Everyone has dreams
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    12. 10-22-2008 08:50 PM #12
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      Quote Originally Posted by poog View Post
      You are right, I lied
      It was a poster cut-out
      Everyone has dreams
      Niggar, Niggar black
      Niggar Niggar Niggar black
      Barack Obama
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    13. 10-22-2008 09:48 PM #13
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      Quote Originally Posted by Sandform View Post
      Niggar, Niggar black
      Niggar Niggar Niggar black
      Barack Obama
      Lololololol.
      Lololololololol.
      Lololololol.
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    14. 10-22-2008 11:49 PM #14
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      There's a reason here
      Why you people fail so hard
      It's because you suck

      Everything works out in the end, sometimes even badly.

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    15. 10-23-2008 01:43 AM #15
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      I'm not good at haikus,
      Am I doing this correctly?
      Oh well.
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    16. 10-23-2008 02:22 PM #16
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      No

      Everything works out in the end, sometimes even badly.

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    17. 10-23-2008 04:46 PM #17
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      There's already a thread for these...

      It's rather populated, too.
      You merely have to change your point of view slightly, and then that glass will sparkle when it reflects the light.
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      Quote Originally Posted by ClouD View Post
      There's already a thread for these...

      It's rather populated, too.
      Is a thread ever really a thread?
      Is it but an un-woven string?
      Drop the ego, and laugh.


      LoloLOlLOlOLOLOLOloloololololol.

      I totally just punk'd ClouD. <3
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    19. 10-23-2008 05:07 PM #19
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      I am the true end
      the only mastered Haiku -
      this is my ego.

      Goodnight faggot. <3
      You merely have to change your point of view slightly, and then that glass will sparkle when it reflects the light.
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    20. 10-23-2008 05:13 PM #20
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      Quote Originally Posted by ClouD View Post
      There's already a thread for these...

      It's rather populated, too.
      I don't see it.
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    21. 10-23-2008 10:28 PM #21
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      This, my first haiku
      will amaze and dazzle you
      bananas are good.
      Last edited by Balestar; 10-23-2008 at 10:37 PM.
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    22. 10-23-2008 10:33 PM #22
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      Quote Originally Posted by Balestar View Post
      This, my first haiku
      will amaze and dazzle you
      bananas are yellow too.

      You have failed the haiku structure.
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      Sorry I forgot the last line was 5! Edited!
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    24. 10-24-2008 12:48 AM #24
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      why must sandform be
      such a troll, he is so mean.
      you, sir just got BURNED
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    25. 10-24-2008 03:56 AM #25
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      My briefs protect them
      They hang like my dignity
      Hairy and wrinkly

      Everything works out in the end, sometimes even badly.

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