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Thread: Not in a good mood... :\
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05-16-2010 03:35 AM #1Lucid Master of Flight Achievements:
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Not in a good mood... :\
today just isn't my day....
something i threw together to get some of it off my chest:
I'm in the dark again
void, my old friend
left blind by scars
i reach my out into the cold
and find nothing near or far.
the same familiar ache
the same cracks running through the old break
i must be using the wrong glue
i must be reusing you
Shades of grey
grow dark each and every day
throwing me back and forth
between the pain and the ecstasy
Love and pain carry the same taste
your lips and wear your face
truth carries a sour tone
with every word you've sewn
illuminating the darkness
i look into the distance
and hope for the best
comment if ya want.tommo likes this.
"MementoMori, the lucid machine"
"There's nothing better than knowing what it's like to fly like superman. Being fully aware of the air whipping by you, controlling every movement of every single atom in your body with a single thought. It's real freedom, and there's not a word good enough to describe it, so I'll just call it dreamy for now."
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05-16-2010 04:23 AM #2Member
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After finding out about lucid dreaming being a monk made a lot more sense.
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05-16-2010 04:27 AM #3Lucid Master of Flight Achievements:
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Thank you
"MementoMori, the lucid machine"
"There's nothing better than knowing what it's like to fly like superman. Being fully aware of the air whipping by you, controlling every movement of every single atom in your body with a single thought. It's real freedom, and there's not a word good enough to describe it, so I'll just call it dreamy for now."
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05-16-2010 04:52 AM #4
I like it too, quite vivid, I can tell you put emotional effort into choicing the phrases. "I'm reusing your darkness" is what's supposed to be stringing together, correct? If so, I like that. Ties the whole thing together really good.
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05-16-2010 05:03 AM #5Lucid Master of Flight Achievements:
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yep, thank you Spen
"MementoMori, the lucid machine"
"There's nothing better than knowing what it's like to fly like superman. Being fully aware of the air whipping by you, controlling every movement of every single atom in your body with a single thought. It's real freedom, and there's not a word good enough to describe it, so I'll just call it dreamy for now."
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05-16-2010 11:30 AM #6
Very good. Very, very good.
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05-16-2010 03:24 PM #7Lucid Master of Flight Achievements:
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Thank you tommo, i appreciate it.
"MementoMori, the lucid machine"
"There's nothing better than knowing what it's like to fly like superman. Being fully aware of the air whipping by you, controlling every movement of every single atom in your body with a single thought. It's real freedom, and there's not a word good enough to describe it, so I'll just call it dreamy for now."
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05-16-2010 09:31 PM #8Unwilling, Improper
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This is awesome. You just gave me some inspiration. *starts on yet another poem*
Go insane for me, I'm that selfish you see
We're a wicked rhyme, a line followed
By the darkest picture, making everyone cry
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08-29-2012 07:38 AM #9Member
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I like what you write.. you can really write something if you're too emotional
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