Thread: Haiku anyone?

I would like to thank 1g5g for inspiring this "haiku about the last porn you watched":



Voyeuristic thrills

Something new and exciting

Submission by choice

Our teacher just taught us about haiku last summer... let see if I can still remember

Raindrops on rooftop
Tranquil under heaven's place
A lonely spinster


is this right?

Through the swaying leaves
Our eyes meet delicately
And the veil is drawn.

out in the garden

a bright moon is beckoning

someone else to play

Fast then slow we tow
green and brown to make me frown
pulley will break chains

here's mine:
dreaming of reality
i feel i see i hear it
so real cant wake up

edit: post now reply

Constants in my dreams
Like a whisper in the wind
Constants in my life?

Tasting like sunrise
You bring warmth to my insides
Thanks, breakfast sandwich.

x}

i am computer
computing is what i do
do i compute you?

Lightning flash

what I thought were faces

are plumes of pampas grass

(it's really mine.. I'm just reading some haiku's now and learning how to make mine hopefully soon I can write my own haiku poem )

candles, unoaked wine,

and LOTS of Adventure Time

yay, power failures!

I is are has thing
does stuff sometimes it is whoa
put it there down on

nothing to do now
i am bored out of my mind
entertain me, please

The biggest question
Am I dreaming or awake?
The Question of Life

Forever Young

It is my hope that
In life, spirit, and mem'ry
You remain at peace..

Wherever you are
I hope you are still smiling
Blissfully at peace.

What remains is proof
Your life, spirit, and mem'ry
Like a ray of light




as a side note, it's really beautiful how posts 101-108 (minus my contributions) sound altogether. All so good.

Winter cutting breath
Another pull just released
This cigarette stinks
_____________________

edit: 11/16/2013

Cousin is moving
Five years now we've run the roads
Will miss him dearly

I am going to
Revive this thread with some art
Maybe I killed it

It's been some time since
My eyes laid upon this thread—
It hasn't grown much.

Television on
Absolutely nothing on
Pococurante

this is a great thread
how can you guys let this die
shame on you people

I like to kill men
The opposing side is gone
I am the winner

Connecting to you
I also enjoy loving
We are together

Making friends is fun
Happy I am after sleep
Let's sleep together

It was just a joke
I only meant on xbox
Time to sleep my love

Concrete dreams crumble,
Into dust as I awake,
that Sandman collects.

Too quiet in here
Not enough diversity
We need more people

Sun warming the earth
Giving energy and life
A true miracle