Could you guys review my dream journal?

What I mean is read some or all my posts to it and tell me what you think. Tell me what I did right and wrong, how well I'm coming along on beginning lucid dreaming, and what I did incorrectly control-wise.

I want to know how I can do better, what you think of my dreams, how good you think my recall is and how I can improve it, and how fast/well I'm coming along lucid dream-wise.

For starters, I haven't gotten any lucid dreams from RCing...