With grateful thanks to Signet, who's words have prompted me to share mine . . . I wasn't going to post this . . . |
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With grateful thanks to Signet, who's words have prompted me to share mine . . . I wasn't going to post this . . . |
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Last edited by cheech; 11-05-2012 at 04:09 PM. Reason: woops!
Many thanks, cheech, and even more thanks for posting your poem. It is quite excellent! |
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Try to imagine a life without timekeeping. You probably can’t. You know the month, the year, the day of the week; you have a schedule, a calendar... Yet all around you, timekeeping is ignored. Birds are not late. A dog does not check its watch. Deer do not fret over passing birthdays. Man alone measures time. Man alone chimes the hour. And, because of this, man alone suffers a paralyzing fear that no other creature endures.
A fear of time running out.
that night , that night |
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The moment awaits and the untimely change beckons your arrival |
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"So Wonderful" |
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Try to imagine a life without timekeeping. You probably can’t. You know the month, the year, the day of the week; you have a schedule, a calendar... Yet all around you, timekeeping is ignored. Birds are not late. A dog does not check its watch. Deer do not fret over passing birthdays. Man alone measures time. Man alone chimes the hour. And, because of this, man alone suffers a paralyzing fear that no other creature endures.
A fear of time running out.
I wish for an explosion |
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I wonder why the people here |
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dreamviews is not YOUR lovely home signet , its a free site for everyone , and this is not a professional poetry contest , its free and aloud for all of us to express ourselves and share it with others. |
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Oh, for pete's sake. Really? Do you always read me wrong? :/ |
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Try to imagine a life without timekeeping. You probably can’t. You know the month, the year, the day of the week; you have a schedule, a calendar... Yet all around you, timekeeping is ignored. Birds are not late. A dog does not check its watch. Deer do not fret over passing birthdays. Man alone measures time. Man alone chimes the hour. And, because of this, man alone suffers a paralyzing fear that no other creature endures.
A fear of time running out.
And dear signet what makes you the expert and master in poetry to call other peoples poetry bland thoughtless rants, maybe to some one else lets say me yours seem like bland rants , its all subjective so lets not be so judgmental. |
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I would like to express my feelings with a poem.. |
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Last edited by Vortaix; 12-17-2012 at 04:11 PM.
This amateur knows that there is nothing subjective about structure, meter, syllable count, and rhyme. |
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I am new to this |
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Signet You can put 10000 articles teaching me about poetry but its worthless to me because to me poetry is a form of art and art in general is not something that can be structured , a human being is free to express him/her self in any form of art , the freedom in expressing is what makes art so amazing , we are not robots lets leave structure for scientific matters and when it comes to art lets be as human and not perfect as we can . |
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Last edited by Lamneth-25; 12-19-2012 at 04:42 AM.
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Goals: For now, exploration!.
Face of an old man. |
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Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake
Deep questions running through my mind |
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"You Can't, You Won't And You Don't Stop"Lucid Goals: [Ask a DC: "Am I dreaming?"] [Ask a DC: "What are you?"]
Try to imagine a life without timekeeping. You probably can’t. You know the month, the year, the day of the week; you have a schedule, a calendar... Yet all around you, timekeeping is ignored. Birds are not late. A dog does not check its watch. Deer do not fret over passing birthdays. Man alone measures time. Man alone chimes the hour. And, because of this, man alone suffers a paralyzing fear that no other creature endures.
A fear of time running out.
I wrote this when my classmate died (no, I won't disclose anymore info) |
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Last edited by Jabre; 12-28-2012 at 12:58 AM.
Alone again, but this time by choice |
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This poem isn't mine, but it's incredibly expressive-Hear the feeling. |
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Goals: For now, exploration!.
Yea I know it sucks. Whatever. |
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"You Can't, You Won't And You Don't Stop"Lucid Goals: [Ask a DC: "Am I dreaming?"] [Ask a DC: "What are you?"]
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