Your version might look cooler, jarrhead, but Invader's right.

RAH + RAH + AH + AH + AH + RO + MA + RO + MA + MA + GA + GA + OOH + LA + LA
= 2(RAH) + 3(AH) + [2(RO + MA) + MA] + 2(GA) + OOH + 2(LA)
= 2(RAH) + 3(AH) + (2RO + 1)MA + 2(GA) + OOH + 2(LA)

...aaand this post didn't really add anything to the thread, did it?