Quote Originally Posted by Darkmatters View Post
God is Gut?
LMAO. Brilliant.

Still loving the story, man! You absolutely have a talent for imagery, and your writing style has a very classic, authentic, light-hearted-folklore type of flair to it (if that makes any sense). I'm actually starting to miss a little more of the dream-like nuances in the tale (although the spider-vision was awesome, and I liked the 'dream within a dream' concept about it). Not to say that the story is getting dull at all (so don't take it that way!), but I'd say the best way I could put it is to compare it to the Matrix and the Matrix Reloaded. I loved Matrix Reloaded, but one main drawback for me was that it lost a lot of that 'tumbling down the rabbit hole' feel to it, that the first one had. I think it's possible to keep that kind of intrigue going - and if anyone can do it, you can - so I just thought I'd throw it out there, as something to think about.

Keep it up!