Thread: write a poem that expresses your thoughts and feelings

Holy shit, I'm feeling sick
Whoever gave me this is a dick
I hope that I feel better now
Because I feel like a cow.

The birds rise early as they sing in the rain
I'm already tired by dawn again
they try to wake me, my eyes,
they strain,
along with the songs and the yells that reminisce with the pain.
but I am forever asleep
anything they try is just a futile waste
I'm trapped beneath a sheath, given up and worn.
the sun, i see as it glazes the sill
I sit watching, yet still running out of will
the light dances on my face, why do I feel so torn?
pull down the blinds
but I don't think I can sleep anymore.
i envy you," how can you be?"
by the time I got close to that point, i was running on empty
so I just stopped right there.
And I never looked back, but the shades are still there
a little bit of sun, creating a glare
that reflects off my eyes
all I see is the hurt, as I look into the skies.

You're so cruel,
I love you, I love you.
You're so cool,
I hate you, I hate you.

You are like the grass beneath my feet
like the wind in the abysmal sky
like the violent, striking waves colliding with the shore,
and falling as I cry.
you're carrying me to a place that I don't want to be,
yet keeping me planted, firm on the ground
and still on my feet.
i beg to differ, but you never make a sound.
I try and get a word, because thats all I need,
but you just stay silent, as I beg
and I plead.

tearing me a sunder
like you know you always do;
ripping me apart
because you know I'll still love you.

but i still hate to see you go,
in such a brash manner...
and it kills me some more,
like an old ruined manor.

You're indifferent to my words,
but its all that I am
because now that you're gone,
nothing, is what have.

you're so unaware of what you're doing,
and what's been done.

keep writing me off, just throw me away.
hurry and give up, you never cared anyway.
i hate myself because I feel so much love,
for someone who doesn't give a fuck.

or so it seems

whats stopping you? I'll even dig my grave
it'll be easy for you, just push me away,
for another couple days,
because I'm sure to break.

maybe I'm looking for too much
you're not how you appear
you seem so oblivious
while I'm just scared.

I've just fabricated this thought in my mind
feeling the hate, one second at a time.
I'm just so dramatic, don't take it bad
but i still don't want it to seem like a crime
to feel upset over you.

I just want your love
Il give while you take
it will be better for us,
but mostly for your sake.

my selfish desires, they eat me alive
as i kill myself, for one last time.
Just try not to look
not that you would otherwise

your words are just looming
around by my mind
my dreams are haunted by your face
i want you so much
i need you in this place



am I allowed to post so much here Dx I'm just writing what comes to mind and how i feel gwuahahhh

Originally Posted by ilovefrootloops

not to be rude but are any of these poems happy?

do you have a problem with this D:<



the point of this is to write how your emotions are.

"Eric,"
In his face I spit,
"You're a dick,
And you smell like shit."

My son is the bright circle in my heart,
filling it with so much light
that it can never again be conquered by the dark.

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My summer's so short
And for that i snort
More School to come
a school filled with rum
Rum without the alcohol
oh the other ingredients
That didn't even rhyme
But the time is a crime
So i enter the school
The one thats not cool
And then i watch a movie
I also bend my knee
And why did I say that?
Because it rhymes
but that didnt
And I dont care
And i come home to Dreamviews
To view the entire Poem
forum
again.
I see a user with the name Erible
And it turns out an age she seeks
An age of a boy
or a girl
named gameoverlord
3
4
5
and it turns out as she

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still doesn't know how to create spoilers

Originally Posted by gameoverlord345

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my summer's so short
and for that i snort
more school to come
a school filled with rum
rum without the alcohol
oh the other ingredients
that didn't even rhyme
but the time is a crime
so i enter the school
the one thats not cool
and then i watch a movie
i also bend my knee
and why did i say that?
Because it rhymes
but that didnt
and i dont care
and i come home to dreamviews
to view the entire poem
forum
again.
I see a user with the name erible
and it turns out an age she seeks
an age of a boy
or a girl
named gameoverlord
3
4
5
and it turns out as she

Spoiler for |||-|||---|||-|||:

still doesn't know how to create spoilers

Spoiler for hello, we meet again:

what now. What now.

Spoiler for spoiler:

what is your age damnit?

Spoiler for VULGAR NAUGHTY POEM, SHIELD YOUR EYES:

BITCH FACE ASS BUTT RAPE MONSTER FUCKER CAT TONGUE SUCKER.

I said this to someone on Omegle, while trolling, then realized it rhymed.
Yes, it is VERY appropriate! do you not agree?

Reflecting on my past
I see all the paths I could have walked
I chose ones with the most challenges
unknowingly
then I think maybe
that's how it's supposed to be

She wants to know my age
on the 6th page
in the website
where she is in plight
She will never know
Just like she will never glow
So she angrily eats some bread
While I say it between 1 and 100

I usually hate writing poems or reading them because most people make very cliché poems about something depressing or love. I consider myself pretty good at improvisation though. Let's see if I can come up with a decent one.

Spoiler for :

Welcome to sleeping
A whole new world awaits
Welcome to dreaming
Close your eyes and open the gates

Welcome to lucidity
Can you believe that it's not real
Welcome to adventure
Touch it and see how it feels

Welcome to creation
Let your mind explode
Welcome to control
It's yours to craft and mold

Welcome to waking
It's sad but has to come
Welcome to remembering
Write it down when you're done

That's my little DVs poem. I hope you like it.

steal my dreams
make me play games
haven't they heard?
life IS a dream
we're too good
to work fast food

I love you.
let's have pigeon babies.
chickens with rabies.
fill the sea of pirates
who used to have scabies
i'm not a clown
he's from Hades
take an umbrella
the rain will wash out the town
i then say farewell
you ate a giraffe
I said "what the fuck?"
just grow an afro
you look like a duck.


IDFK

Nodding my head as I sit in my bed while I troll through this thread, read me say what I said.

Little boy
Why must you stalk me?
I don't even want you to talk to me.
Go away.

Originally Posted by Sunndreammx

Nodding my head as I sit in my bed while I troll through this thread, read me say what I said.

In the darkness of the night,
a little lantern grows
and compassion shows
a lovely reading light.

That last one was too strong
I felt the need to know
the meaning of life
my eyes start to show
a little red and dazed
my thoughts freely flow
to my fingers and
a typing we will go

Originally Posted by cspicer2

I felt the need to know
the meaning of life

:] aimmm lul

This started out as a Facebook status, but it was too long (more like, too great). Music is like poetry, so I feel this deserves to be here, especially because it expresses my thoughts and feelings.

8AM waking up in the morning,
gotta be fresh, gotta go down the hall,
gotta have my plate, gotta have my toast,
seein' everything, the time is goin',
tickin' on and on, nobody's rushin',
gotta get down to the patio,
gotta pot some plants, I see my mom.

Kickin' in the small pots,
sittin' in the big pots,
gotta make my mind up,
which pot should use?

It's Friday, Friday,
gotta pot plants on Friday,
every plant is lookin' forward to the weekend, weekend
Friday, Friday,
pottin' plants on Friday,
every plant is lookin' forward to the weekend, weekend!

Lots of rain, lots of rain (yeah)
Lots of rain, lots of rain (yeah)
Rain, rain, rain, rain
Lookin' forward to the weekend



I would have added more, but I really do need to go pot plants.

Originally Posted by dakotahnok

Little boy
Why must you stalk me?
I don't even want you to talk to me.
Go away.

is it werent summer right now i would be saying this all the fucking time

I walk in the rain, hiding my face.
Trying to wipe away the tears,
Wipe away the memories they are made of.
But alas, the past cannot be erased.
And the memories it holds, will never fade.

The sky mourns, so does my heart.
What is this pain?
A feeling that no one can describe?
Like a fire that never burnt;
A song never heard.

The world seems distant,
Like a dream when you are living it.
Reality becomes unreal.
Time runs out of time.

The world rotates about me,
Oblivious to my feelings.
But that is fine,
for loneliness is my way of life.

A heart impossible to enter,
A lie impossible to detect.
Eyes impossible to see through,
A soul impossible to enlighten.
Nothing, that is what I have become.

The rain stops.
So does the pain.
"You can get over it", a voice says.
A voice that still haunts me,
a past that I could have had.
How I regret it now,
I wish I could take it back.
But alas, the past cannot be erased.

In the abyss of darkness, I lay forgotten.
The time is gone now, the fire is out.
The flowers never bloomed, the sun never rose.
Nothing can change me now.
That is my Fate.


__ Max.