Here is an entry i recently put into my personal DJ after taking a nap. Any suggestions?

"I was lucid in some sort of really unstable world (Felt like I was a baby in the womb just floating around in this dark world) I then rubbed my hands together and things began to stabalize and I found myself in a realy dark version of a room similar to my own. I got up out of bed and walked around. I could hear really loud music playing in my head that seem to reflect how my emotions were, or perhaps my emotions reflected the music.
As I Kept walking I noticed the softness of the ground and how strange the dream world was. I though about my mantra and kept repeating "Life is a dream I am Lucid" and I kept trying to make it out of that room and first tried to imagine a portal that would get me the hell out of there but I didn’t believe in my powers, and then headed for the door, to get distracted by the hardwood flloors. I soon woke up after staring at the hardwood floors. "

Thank you guys for reading i know its a lot, your input is greatly appreciated