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      What am I at war with
      other states of mind
      The thing that I adore
      is the thing that takes my life
      Somethings I were born with
      some things are only mine
      So I will stick with me
      untill I change my mind

      Finding myself torn
      between the things
      I am involved in
      countless sins
      and still beneath an angels wing

      Will I bring your heart to see me
      or will I sing myself into a sweet sleep
      When I put the word out in these mean streets
      That I really believe we would be a teen dream between in these clean sheets
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      My love, don't even try to fight it I know you no longer can hide it. In a dream, I can feel your hands on my body and now, I feel like a hottie.
      It's all that I deem, Love and passion bursting at the seems.
      I can feel the magic thru my fingertips.
      I know this sounds clever like a hand on a lever as I sail thru a river on my new endeavor. I feel brave like I feel the love burning and raging thru my veins.
      Be a man, take the rains.
      I feel like I'm in a haze,
      and my heart is ablaze but, it must be a phase.
      I don't feel ashamed of the fame although
      I know that I would be to blame because my heart is hard to tame.
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      The first time I saw you looking at me like you liked me I couldn’t believe my own eyes.
      But somehow they convinced me they were for real this time…
      Now I realize that real eyes, tell real lies...


      First realize that real eyes tell real lies.
      So when you’re sure you see me with your real eyes
      In just the right light
      to justify fighting the good fight, to strangle the sin.
      to burst my bubble, burn the demon within
      to curse my crumbling world the moment I let you in
      Please know how I struggled
      I built it all from the rubble
      that once had me stumblin,
      fallin all alone in the dark
      and truly ugly parts of my lonely heart,

      Too many scars to be all that humble.

      Cause nursing my bleeding knees and shins,
      meant removing, hiding and saving the torn skin
      But now deep within I’m singing blessings to the warm, soft wind
      Hope it carries to my long lost kin.

      Look at me now, my loved ones! Look at me now, I made wings!
      I made wings!

      Ain’t never gotta stumble again.

      I got wings!

      So lust of mine,
      trust that I
      must be wide open to compromise at any time
      After all it’s all I’ve ever had,
      all I ask is that you give me a chance.

      you’ll tell me first right?

      Tell me first
      Let me try to quence your thirst
      for a fight right away.
      I see you as a portrait
      of pure beauty,
      and I think you’re way too great to make this all about your booty.
      I love your hair and your eyes, your beautiful smile
      I love when you’re sober, I love when we’re high.
      What freaks me out is I don’t know why
      You freak me out to the point where I wanna cry
      Worried and shy,
      about some guy
      who might not exist
      Am I on your list?
      I’m not scared to die
      but somehow I'm scared to say hi..
      Fuck is this!?
      At the age of twenty five
      you got me squirming like a masochist,
      wishing for a sign
      that I could leave my fear behind
      and be real with you.

      Afraid that I would scare you away.
      I can’t lie to you and I can’t wait.
      Is it too late to ask you out on a date?

      Oh…No it’s ok…

      Thats… what I expected you to say.. actually…

      no..no..its ok.

      Nevermind.

      I’ll be fine.




      Shit.
      Last edited by LighrkVader; 10-26-2017 at 07:18 PM.
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      The Continuum

      The first three dimensions,
      descriptions of space.
      The fourth,
      a description of time.

      The one holds the power,
      to juggle the place;
      and binds her,
      through rhythm and rhyme.

      - amateur, 2017
      Last edited by amateur; 11-27-2017 at 11:37 PM. Reason: too obtuse.

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      You kissed me in Twenty Eleven,
      and that kiss we will revive; because
      the Train That Arrived At La Ciotat
      Arrived again in nineteen thirty-five.
      When I was in high school I was very ambitious, I wanted to be the Class President but I missed out by only about 3 votes.

      So they made me the Class Secretary of Defence.

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      You kissed me in Twenty Eleven,
      and that kiss we will revive; because
      the Train That Arrived At La Ciotat
      Arrived again in nineteen thirty-five.
      When I was in high school I was very ambitious, I wanted to be the Class President but I missed out by only about 3 votes.

      So they made me the Class Secretary of Defence.

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      There is true beauty in all suffering.
      Nothingness is something and so then I'll never fall asleep again.
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      never written a poem before
      absolutely love the ones in lord of the rings novels
      not sure if these are supposed to rhyme
      who cares
      or do they
      idk
      weird
      best poem ever
      just got a little bored in class
      loving life though
      wanting a lucid dream
      am i crazy
      nah
      just a little bored
      stay lucid

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      Cold wind blowing
      Its still snowing
      The pile keeps growing
      Traffic slowing
      Children snowball throwing
      Tow trucks towing
      I'd rather be out mowing
      Waiting for spring to start showing

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      O' smoke detector light;
      I try to sleep but always see thee;
      And were it not for this plight;
      it would, most assuredly be;
      Much easier to close my eyes;
      And also to keep them so;
      Yet there thy stay on every night;
      I merely tolerate thee;
      O' smoke detector light.

      O' smoke detector light;
      Thine dim green is indeed blinding;
      For when I shut my my eyes 'fore night;
      Thy will reappear, always reminding;
      That my eyes are not shut;
      And my thoughts are brought back;
      The end of my relaxation is abrupt;
      For this thy have a knack;
      End this sorrow, End this plight;
      Please stop this;
      O' smoke detector light.

      O' smoke detector light;
      I have a solution to my plight;
      If I see you and end my thoughts;
      End my struggle against this knot;
      Of thoughts in my head that I wish to be dead;
      I will relax my body again;
      And drift off to dream once more, my friend;
      I love thee;
      O' smoke detector light.
      That certainly is a nice red button you have there.

      It'd be a shame if someone were to...

      Press it.

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      Not a poem I think but how I'm feeling right now...

      Some want to take advantage of me
      But I'm not a fool anymore
      I must only trust myself
      I can't control others
      But I can control how I feel
      I'm going back to being shy
      I'm tired of being angry inside
      The crap they put me through
      Has turned me into a better version of myself
      I'm thankful for my struggles
      But now I will work towards
      A better future
      For myself

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      If we all just had the things we wanted
      Would we be at all better for it?
      Do you think we might transcend the same cycle we're a part of everyday?
      Despite our best intentions, failing in all the exact same ways?

      We're here each day not knowing why, but alive
      Riding down one colossal gravity slide
      The more we struggle the faster we go
      The only way forward is down, why not go with the flow?

      But just what are we, you and me?
      Are we all just ghosts in the machine?
      Every day we shed our old selves just like dead skin cells
      Were they ever even us, do "ghosts" really dwell within these shells?

      Information from outside fills my brain, sometimes driving me insane
      It shapes me, defines who I am, and I fear who this person becomes is more than I can contain
      Caveat emptor: beware the despair for those who seek the fruit of knowledge comes
      Ingest more than just one meal's portion and the mind erupts as a gut filled with plums

      But alas, one day we all face the the truth and it's a hangman's noose
      And there is no thing, neither man, nor God, that can cut us loose
      But rejoice, for indeed it is the very object of our salvation, one that will set us free
      Once we just let go and accept our short-lived suffering, for the first time our eyes will truly see
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      I tried surrealist automatic writing today, which should theoretically capture subconscious thoughts and feelings. This is the resulting poem, if one can call it a poem:

      Aimlessly wandering through the nebulous void of the Saturn-daystar.
      Ever quickened for the fate-time of neverending crystal.
      Into supernal sunrise, the cataclysmic oblong noodle shop.
      Don’t fret about the storm-saber when the beaver of bereavement comes forth into the automata.
      Strike fast and hard against the dark when the dark becomes the light of the world-stop cacophony.
      Behold!
      Come forth!
      Arise into the nightscape,
      When the noon turns to dusk and the waterbuffalo bellows.
      Screaming automatically the singing Imam dances in the night-tide spectacle of new-aged wine.
      Attain to the buzzing of melodious wasps singing songs about the programming of the noon.
      Owls wait in the belfries for the leftovers of the battlefield where the discourses are held and the night-time awaits.
      Time, Time, Time, chimes the everfull clock of dusk-and-noon,
      Where the waters of the walrus froth forth from the spring of the river of wine.


      The best line is the third, I think.
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      I don't know how I feel today
      I just can't find words to say
      The heavy spring clouds last night were grey
      Yet I did not wish them all away

      But last night I knew the day would come
      That tomorrow's sun would today rise from
      East behind the hills which lie beyond town
      The brilliant rays shone through trees on down

      Here we are, still here again
      Perhaps it's best we get along then
      Help ourselves get through one more cycle 'round
      And make home more than just shelter on some space dirt-mound
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      Who uses the potty?

      Every-botty.

      Anyone who uses the potty....

      Can roll with me.

      Because using the potty...

      Is what connects us.

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